I offer a one-hour video critique of your picture book manuscript. First, I read and reflect on your story and then we have a one-hour call that includes feedback and comparative titles and, mostly, a conversation about your project in the big picture so I can be of help as you bring your vision for your story to life with a revision strategy as well as specific ideas. Why a conversation? I think it's important to be able to discuss a story together, for me to hear from you about its origin and what energizes you about it—the WHY of you taking it on as well as what you’re aiming to accomplish. In addition, we can discuss and brainstorm together, which offers more support via collaboration and reciprocity than a traditional written critique. $225.